White Space Rivers
I recently read that the curves of white space that sometimes snake their way through the text in books and magazines are called rivers. Editors try to avoid this white space because the reader's eye is invariably drawn to the river. Rivers distract. Rivers split. Rivers take us somewhere else, and that is what the words should be doing. White space rivers steal purpose from text.
If those white spaces (which I have been distracted by - when I was younger I drew pencil lines in them) are rivers, then the letters that fall along the edges are the banks. Words and sentences climb away from the river into more stable land, into mountains. As I write, I realize that I have a clear picture in my mind of the Hudson River near the Catskill Mountains, a place in which I lived for one year (though this is hard to believe for some reason). Driving over the Kingston-Rhinecliff Bridge was always an exhilaration. The river and its banks changed each time. They hid under fog or froze, turned red, brown, & orange and fell into each other. Sometimes the land on the east side rose brilliantly green over the water and rolled back for miles.
Hmm. Like I said, rivers distract. I was going to compare the notion of white space as river and text as land to Italo Calvino's expression of language as shifting sand dunes, but the river took me somewhere else.
And because this is called the Poetry Forum, a poem:
If those white spaces (which I have been distracted by - when I was younger I drew pencil lines in them) are rivers, then the letters that fall along the edges are the banks. Words and sentences climb away from the river into more stable land, into mountains. As I write, I realize that I have a clear picture in my mind of the Hudson River near the Catskill Mountains, a place in which I lived for one year (though this is hard to believe for some reason). Driving over the Kingston-Rhinecliff Bridge was always an exhilaration. The river and its banks changed each time. They hid under fog or froze, turned red, brown, & orange and fell into each other. Sometimes the land on the east side rose brilliantly green over the water and rolled back for miles.
Hmm. Like I said, rivers distract. I was going to compare the notion of white space as river and text as land to Italo Calvino's expression of language as shifting sand dunes, but the river took me somewhere else.
And because this is called the Poetry Forum, a poem:
Body and Soul II | |
by Charles Wright | |
(for Coleman Hawkins) The structure of landscape is infinitesimal, |